final critique (notes)

I received some really good and productive notes during the final critique. Especially the point about my work sort of being tainted by social media and Instagram specifically. I see now there is equal, if not more, power in the writing when compared to the photographs. They both hold the same amount of weight in the project. It took me a little while to actually realize this.

Next course of action is to figure out an efficient way to incorporate the writing and the photography. I don’t want one to outweigh the other.